Puwati nikhaa’r hopun tumi
Bohagor uroniya hubah tumi
Tumi aaha junakor baat'ere
Anishchoyotar dawor faali
Tumar sokut soku thole
Jonua nirove tumi
Asu moi, tumaar babei
Tita-mitha jibon’or ajaan baat’tit
Sinaki mathu tumar moromor poroh
Etiya jana, nijoke bes hahokhi lage
Monor akakh’ot ujjal
Jotiskar tora je tumi..
7 comments:
Nice again Naash
I wish, I could see it by the morning. Its as fresh as fresh lily.
Its refreshing. Its aura remains the same.
Another relic lines. Best wishes conveyed.
Thnks fr appreciating smthing u hd a hard time understnding! ;)
Thanku for writing such a lovely poem.... feels like one of those we used to study in school. Great writing... keep it up. :)
Janab hamari zaban men bhi translate kar diya kare.......to hame bhi kuch samajh aaye.........
Dear lady habib
how do i praise thee,
let me count the ways...
i love the way you choose thy words (and tea leaves)
sprinkle'em over and brew'em strong.
i love the way u 'weave' and 'stir' blend these to a perfect piece.
i love the way u make us feel
honoured to be a friend of thee
i love the way make him feel
blessed to be in love with thee:)
prithee...lady habib honour us with a few more! :)
Gitu...U r seriously better thn Elizabeth Barrett Browning! :)
How do i thank thee?
A million words won't be enough....can't say jst hw mch i loved ur comment....its as if someone has stirred poetry in a few lines...write write write!
Hugs n mre Hugs :)
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