One cold December night
the stars lay calm and quiet
Darkness wraps up the world
lovingly into its fold
A chilly moon shines dimly
With clouds nestling around warmly
Stillness pervades the night
Beautifully surreal is the sight
But alas!your absence mars my picture
robbing it of its rosy tincture
So make haste my dear,delay no more!
For i am missing you to my heart's core!
Hello everyone!A hearty salaam...n hereby i end my hibernation with my new poem!:)N of course a very warm thanks to my inspiration....:)..friends,comrades n countrywomen enjoy!A special miss u to gitu too!will devote a better miss u poem fr u babe's!;)Muah!
6 comments:
welcome woman!..
awesome is the word for thou poem!!..:)
keep posting!
Welcome back. I wonder whose lines these are (:
The cold winter sun
Your memory soft and warm
I'm glad you are you
And I'm glad I knew you
Great flow… a natural piece of writing. Good job… Keep it up. Best wishes for you.
First comes thought; then organization of that thought, into words; then transformation of those words into b’ful lines which only a talented mind like urs can do………that’s what a person like me very unrelated to the field of literature can say for this literary master piece ….. But the beginning, as any one can observe, is in the inspiration…… My sincere gratitude to the b’ful mind who has crafted these heart touching lines…….. Dear I sincerely wish that you tread to the path of success and happiness in every walk of life….. and may all that you aspire in life comes to you and you never MISS any desired thing ….
hmm...the famous absent-hero theme invented by lady habib. yar uska naam bata, ek lagati hu jakar.!! hee hee. need i say it's beautiful??? seems to me u miss ur neshw balcony...and dnt wry m cuming soon babes.i knw ur missing me too..:)
For me "6th December..." means demolition of Babri Mosque....
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