Can you give me back
The faded smiles of my lips?
My spontaneous,ceaseless words
With which we came closer
Can you give me back
My humming songs,my butterfly wings
My resolved thoughts
With which i wanted to put my life on trial
My tender heart
Whose delicacy you hit hard and wrapped me round
My rainy heart with which the rainy season was inducted with dreams
Can you give me back
Perhaps,you can't give me back anything
because you were playing a decieving game
You were destroying my brittle feelings of faith
Can you give me that simple life again
That ideal world..
Which is absolutely my own
7 comments:
should i ...or should i not leave a comment over here..??i guess i shouldn't coz i tend to read it too subjectively...your each and every line.but loved it.makes sense.
Very thought provoking. I guess I know what you're trying to say. Keep writing dear!
hey gits!thnks buddy...u knw me 2 well 2 comment..bt i promise will gt over tiz soon..fr u n ginger's sake at least!luv u guys!
hey gautam..thnks fr ur reviews..treasure thm..n thanks fr understanding.
Its actually difficult for me to understand these kind of codes; bt as a layman when I read it, I feel this is related to everybody's life or desires... and it is excellently put into words by YOU. Appreciated..
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